invisible downpour of.....rain *POTD 5-13-06*
there she stands, alone, in the hurricane of grief, swaying just slightly undecided, picked up, and in that wind, slammed down, like a leaf... just an angel of disaster, a virgin to the happiness...
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Quote:and the wind blows her hair, tangling it in knots, feeling the cold darkness with the memories that cloud her mind, and what she's been taught.... Wow, Debb, this is a downpour so intense it's...
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I must agree, an intense vision alive in your vivid thought and imagery. Great work!
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*standing ovation* Alright, my new fave from you, for certain.
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Thanks Steve. . .I appreciate your wonderful comments. "Scribed with my heart in hand"
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Traci. . .you're much to kind but thanks I appreciate the *Standing Ovation* "Scribed with my heart in hand"
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Wow, Rick, you must have infared vision to see the invisible downpour. Thanks for the 'awesome' comment....................... *Hugs* Debb "Scribed with my heart in hand"
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and she knows these emotions are countless, and in vain.. because no one sees her tears.... when she's crying in the rain. I absolutely love that ending stanza~! Excellent write, Deb! I enjoyed the...
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"because no one sees her tears.... when she's crying in the rain." Debb... This moved me to the edge of my own tears. Excellent!!<center> <img border=0...
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Quote:and she knows these emotions are countless, and in vain.. because no one sees her tears.... when she's crying in the rain. Maybe that is exactly why she does it There is a security in crying...
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does she cry in the rain...or does it rain upon her when she cries. beautifully penned. alan.
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Its beautiful Brian. . . Smiles 'n hugs, Debb "Scribed with my heart in hand"
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Congratulations on your POTD award, Debb! STANDING OVATION! *hugs* Rick
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Congratulations on your POTD award, Debb! Well deserved.Loverly writing. Alan
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Such honors I've received on this piece. . . WOW! A very warm heartfelt thanks to 'All.' "Scribed with my heart in hand"
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Excellent characterization, excellent write MS. Congrats on POTD as well Peace, Po
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Traci... I'm estatic you've so many favorites. . . smiles. . . *hugs Traci* Debb "Scribed with my heart in hand"
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Excellent characterization, excellent write MS. Congrats on POTD as well Oh thanks very much, Po. I can't beat double excellence. . . (((hugs))) Debb "Scribed with my heart in hand"
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